A Density of Souls
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The scenes in this book don't follow each other in a smooth way that builds a story. They seem to change unconnected from one scene to the next. It is stopping me from wanting to read further because I don't get the sense of following a story. Things are just happening with no connection, even within the individual scenes, things don't flow in a story order. Things are just introduced and you don't know why they are being shown. It's like randomly putting together a jigsaw puzzle. That is not enjoyable in a book. And no, it's not suspense. Suspense is when the reader has clue about what is doing on but details are being withheld. With this, the story is being withheld.
Description
Book Information
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The scenes in this book don't follow each other in a smooth way that builds a story. They seem to change unconnected from one scene to the next. It is stopping me from wanting to read further because I don't get the sense of following a story. Things are just happening with no connection, even within the individual scenes, things don't flow in a story order. Things are just introduced and you don't know why they are being shown. It's like randomly putting together a jigsaw puzzle. That is not enjoyable in a book. And no, it's not suspense. Suspense is when the reader has clue about what is doing on but details are being withheld. With this, the story is being withheld.