Pretty good
Well written and enough light drama to keep it interesting but not too much. Liked the communication and the fact that Ed always managed to say no when it mattered. I guess my only problem is that I don't quite understand what Ed sees in Alec. The night in the club, sure. Hot guy. Whatever. But afterwards? If my boss treated me that way after I turned him down, I would not want to go any further. I don't know.
The Law of Attractionvon Jay NorthcoteJaybird Press
