The premise hooked me but the execution didn't save itself. I appreciate the overall effort of wanting to represent a demographic of people you've worked with and care about, I really do. But the same narration styles and character voices didn't do anything to meaningfully help establish any differences between the characters. As in, personality-wise, they are different, and they change, but this wasn't helped by how they narrated. "Sometimes you gotta wait a long time to find what's true."
Girls Like Usvon Gail GilesCandlewick
