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This book slides from one event to another without giving any clue to the sense of importance the events have. For example, there is a scene where the girl goes to the mall with her mom and they have fun shopping. I know this scene is not relevant to the larger plot of this book, if the book is about a girl going into space and saving the world. I get that this is an example of the author trying to show and not tell that the mother and daughter had a positive emotionally bonded relationship. However, it could have been expressed differently/better with a more relevant scene. Choice of what scenes to include and what scenes to leave out are the major part of pacing and the story’s progression. I didn’t think this book began well and unfortunately I didn’t give it a lot of time to improve. The good parts of the book were: the details of a girl with something inside of her that was going to come out and change her life, how it was alien related, and how some evil alien force wanted to kill her because of what was inside of her. I only read to 4% and didn’t get to the part where she got to space or saved the world. So I am probably not qualified to write a review of this book. What I saw in other reviews that they liked in this book was a discussion of pronouns. So many reviews mentioned that. It made me think that this is not intended to be a space book, but a book about Political Correct topics and progressive ideas. If you imagine going to another planet and need to mention that the aliens there tell you about pronouns.......
2. Okt. 2022
This book slides from one event to another without giving any clue to the sense of importance the events have. For example, there is a scene where the girl goes to the mall with her mom and they have fun shopping. I know this scene is not relevant to the larger plot of this book, if the book is about a girl going into space and saving the world. I get that this is an example of the author trying to show and not tell that the mother and daughter had a positive emotionally bonded relationship. However, it could have been expressed differently/better with a more relevant scene. Choice of what scenes to include and what scenes to leave out are the major part of pacing and the story’s progression. I didn’t think this book began well and unfortunately I didn’t give it a lot of time to improve. The good parts of the book were: the details of a girl with something inside of her that was going to come out and change her life, how it was alien related, and how some evil alien force wanted to kill her because of what was inside of her. I only read to 4% and didn’t get to the part where she got to space or saved the world. So I am probably not qualified to write a review of this book. What I saw in other reviews that they liked in this book was a discussion of pronouns. So many reviews mentioned that. It made me think that this is not intended to be a space book, but a book about Political Correct topics and progressive ideas. If you imagine going to another planet and need to mention that the aliens there tell you about pronouns.......
2. Okt. 2022





