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SPOILER❗️
So. This is going to be a tough one. I'm SO mad at the author. She has done an incredible job on her first book in this series (riot house) but this? This was just disappointing. First, I loved the characters. They had so so so much to offer and I loved their chemistry together it was just perfect! The author is really good at describing what love feels like, however she lacks the ability to describe the feeling of sadness or longing and that to a point where it's absolutely ridiculous and not in any remotely way relatable! I understand that sex has a really important role in this book (more than it has in the first so there's a lot more smut scenes) BUT bringing it up every chance you get? Daaaang. Thinking about how the mc misses his dick every time she talks about missing him is just fucked up and annoying. They shared more than that. They shared love. And life. Nonetheless the filthy sex they had is the only thing she's longing about. At some point in the book he was commanded to stay away from carrie and break her heart and all he did was just accept it? He didn't even flinch. He didn't hesitate and he didn't resist. That's SO not his character like. The Dash we followed for 300 or sum pages would fight for her. Don't get me wrong. I think him breaking her heart was a really good plot twist and made "sense" considering the story line. BUT it's the way he was so nonchalant about it that didn't sit right with me. If there were moments where the author wrote about how painful it was for Dash to see Carrie suffer, she explained it so poorly, that you couldn't empathize with the characters at all. But how could you? The writer herself couldn't even empathize with her characters! In my opinion, the author screwed up the characters and did them so dirty.
2. Jan. 2024
SPOILER❗️
So. This is going to be a tough one. I'm SO mad at the author. She has done an incredible job on her first book in this series (riot house) but this? This was just disappointing. First, I loved the characters. They had so so so much to offer and I loved their chemistry together it was just perfect! The author is really good at describing what love feels like, however she lacks the ability to describe the feeling of sadness or longing and that to a point where it's absolutely ridiculous and not in any remotely way relatable! I understand that sex has a really important role in this book (more than it has in the first so there's a lot more smut scenes) BUT bringing it up every chance you get? Daaaang. Thinking about how the mc misses his dick every time she talks about missing him is just fucked up and annoying. They shared more than that. They shared love. And life. Nonetheless the filthy sex they had is the only thing she's longing about. At some point in the book he was commanded to stay away from carrie and break her heart and all he did was just accept it? He didn't even flinch. He didn't hesitate and he didn't resist. That's SO not his character like. The Dash we followed for 300 or sum pages would fight for her. Don't get me wrong. I think him breaking her heart was a really good plot twist and made "sense" considering the story line. BUT it's the way he was so nonchalant about it that didn't sit right with me. If there were moments where the author wrote about how painful it was for Dash to see Carrie suffer, she explained it so poorly, that you couldn't empathize with the characters at all. But how could you? The writer herself couldn't even empathize with her characters! In my opinion, the author screwed up the characters and did them so dirty.
2. Jan. 2024






