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Good Story with some weaknesses.
The story definitely had good beginnings and entertained me despite some weaknesses. For me personally, the biggest obstacle was that it was written from the first person perspective. It needed some time to overcome this. The second obstacle was that it contained a lot of errors and I sometimes had to guess what could be meant. The third point that bothered me was that storylines started and then didn't end, there are so many loose threads and unanswered questions. The fourth point is very serious for me: you don't owe it to anyone to come out and you don't have to apologize if you come out years later. No one has a right to you coming out - being punished for it and apologizing in the process isn‘t a good message. I don't think it‘s a message that should be left uncommented, especially when the whole story claims that it's okay to be who you are, how difficult it can be in the world to find your way around where you are. I would have liked a message from the author that certain characters might not behave as they should and that in the real world you don't owe anyone anything even if you decide to never come out. If you keep that in mind, you'll get a good story that could definitely help you at least to find your way in the religious madness. Ist definitely conveys the seriousness of the topic.
Beschreibung
Beiträge
Good Story with some weaknesses.
The story definitely had good beginnings and entertained me despite some weaknesses. For me personally, the biggest obstacle was that it was written from the first person perspective. It needed some time to overcome this. The second obstacle was that it contained a lot of errors and I sometimes had to guess what could be meant. The third point that bothered me was that storylines started and then didn't end, there are so many loose threads and unanswered questions. The fourth point is very serious for me: you don't owe it to anyone to come out and you don't have to apologize if you come out years later. No one has a right to you coming out - being punished for it and apologizing in the process isn‘t a good message. I don't think it‘s a message that should be left uncommented, especially when the whole story claims that it's okay to be who you are, how difficult it can be in the world to find your way around where you are. I would have liked a message from the author that certain characters might not behave as they should and that in the real world you don't owe anyone anything even if you decide to never come out. If you keep that in mind, you'll get a good story that could definitely help you at least to find your way in the religious madness. Ist definitely conveys the seriousness of the topic.